Template:Did you know nominations/Shakotan, Hokkaidō

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:57, 18 September 2012 (UTC)

Shakotan, Hokkaidō edit

Shakotan, Hokkaidō

Created/expanded by Prburley (talk). Self nom at 19:03, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

Article has been expanded more than 5x in the last 5 days, is long enough and meets policy. Hook is engaging and neutral. VQuakr (talk) 07:05, 12 September 2012 (UTC)

  • Without looking closer: the hook needs a (pictured) behind the pictured cape. Also: is it Shakotan Peninsula or Shakotan peninsula, is "Peninsula" part of the name? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:22, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
  • I edited the hook above to add (image) and Shakotan Peninsula and the town of for some disambiguation, but I'm not sure if that's where or how I edit a hook. Prburley (talk) 11:02, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Normally you leave the original hook and word an alternative with a number, for reference, such as (note that pictured is always italic):
ALT1: ... that the town of Shakotan is home to the three great capes of the Shakotan Peninsula: Kamui (pictured), Shakotan, and Ōgon? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:08, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Great. Thanks so much. Prburley (talk) 17:06, 13 September 2012 (UTC)