Template:Did you know nominations/Sextet (Poulenc)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 06:15, 26 February 2016 (UTC)
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Sextet (Poulenc)
edit- ... that Francis Poulenc revised his Sextet for wind quintet and piano six years after its premiere because he thought the original was "badly put together"?
- ALT1:... that composer and critic Florent Schmitt criticized the Sextet of Francis Poulenc after its premiere for being vulgar?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Zvezdelina Stankova
Created by Johanna (talk). Self-nominated at 03:36, 9 February 2016 (UTC).
Length & date ok. A couple of minor comments on the article: the date of the original composition is 1931–2 according to Ref 1 & 1932 in Ref 7, not 1930–2 as per lead, which should be clarified and explicitly referenced somewhere. Also the 18 mins duration in the lead does not seem to be referenced. Both hooks are short, interesting and check out to online sources. Alt 1 should probably change "in its premiere" to a different preposition (after, on, at). The article appears neutral & adequately referenced, apart from the points I note. QPQ still needs to be done. I didn't see any issues with close paraphrasing and Earwig didn't pick up anything. Espresso Addict (talk) 03:11, 12 February 2016 (UTC)
- @Espresso Addict: Thank you for the review! I have added the QPQ, tweaked the hook, and fixed your comments on the article. Let me know if you have any more concerns or questions. Johanna(talk to me!) 18:45, 12 February 2016 (UTC)
Everything looks good now. Espresso Addict (talk) 23:03, 12 February 2016 (UTC)
