Template:Did you know nominations/Senator Murphy gun control filibuster

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:40, 4 July 2016 (UTC)

Chris Murphy gun control filibuster

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Created by E.M.Gregory (talk), Neutrality (talk), and Josve05a (talk). Nominated by Tom29739 (talk) at 21:32, 15 June 2016 (UTC).

  • I've nominated the article for deletion here. ansh666 05:45, 17 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Full review needed; AfD was closed as "Keep". Article has since been renamed; I've completed all necessary adjustments to this page. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:29, 27 June 2016‎ (UTC)
  • Based on QPQ checker, Tom29739 has had no previous nominations, so this does not require a QPQ. Hook is sound, quote is cited right at the top of the article. The rest of the articles is equally as well cited. Copy vio spot checks didn't raise anything. However, one niggling issue - the hook is slightly over the 200 character maximum. Personally I'd just trim "Democrat of Connecticut" from the hook as while it's descriptive in the article, it isn't necessary for the hook once you've said Senator. But I'll leave it up to you to work out what to trim - you'll probably just need to take out a word or two. Miyagawa (talk) 09:35, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
@Miyagawa:: I've trimmed the hook, it's now 179 characters long. Tom29739 [talk] 13:05, 28 June 2016 (UTC).
Great, happy to sign this off in that case. Miyagawa (talk) 13:07, 28 June 2016 (UTC)