Template:Did you know nominations/Sardar Ayaz Sadiq

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The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 23:04, 11 July 2013 (UTC)

Sardar Ayaz Sadiq edit

Created by Delljvc (talk), nominated Sahara4u (talk) at 14:48, 5 June 2013 (UTC).

  • Done. Zia Khan 04:17, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Image removed. Zia Khan 05:02, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Zia Khan 11:55, 6 June 2013 (UTC)

The sources seem to meet reliability and the text represents accurately the (few) sources I checked, but a copyedit for English grammar is needed. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 05:20, 6 June 2013 (UTC)

  • Being 19th Speaker is not interesting. Are the figures 258/313 unique in some way? §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 12:40, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Looks quite well overall. No copyvio, good coverage obvious. Should go ahead. Faizan 13:03, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
When three editors are already commenting on problems with the article or hook, what should your green tick be interpreted as? §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 13:37, 6 June 2013 (UTC)
Not 19th, to become a speaker (the highest office of National Assembly of Pakistan) is quite interesting itself and securing a majority of more than 2/3rd is much more. Zia Khan 01:21, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
Anything thats not first is not interesting. Thats why i asked if 258/313 is a notable score. And don't just say it, but prove it. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 06:42, 12 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Since there haven't been any significant edits to the article since SandyGeorgia requested a copyedit for English grammar, and Dharmadhyaksha's issues were unaddressed at the time that Faizan's review was made, I think the identified issues need to be addressed before this can be fully approved and promoted. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:49, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

ALT: ... that Sardar Ayaz Sadiq was elected member of National Assembly of Pakistan for the third consecutive term in the 2013 election and defeated PTI's chairman Imran Khan twice? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sahara4u (talkcontribs)

The ALT hook seems good to me. Good to go with this hook, if the identified issues get addressed. Faizan 06:40, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I just took care of some redundancy in the intro, but the article still needs a more thorough copyedit—Sahara4u's edits on June 18 (after my previous post) only addressed some issues in the intro, but did not touch the body of the article. Have struck the original hook, since Dharmadhyaksha's issues with it have not been addressed. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:33, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Hasn't been edited in this time, issues unresolved. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:37, 11 July 2013 (UTC)