Template:Did you know nominations/Sarah Tenant-Flowers

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The result was: promoted by sst✈^(conjugate) 13:32, 14 February 2016 (UTC)
ALT2 promoted

Sarah Tenant-Flowers edit

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~~... that Sarah Tenant-Flowers is considered one of the "most versatile choral specialists" of England?~~

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Anton Lundqvist

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 12:53, 21 January 2016 (UTC).

DYK checklist template

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Passes DYK checklist. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 18:51, 8 February 2016 (UTC)

@Nvvchar: What this hook fails to mention is that this was the opinion of The Royal Welsh College of Music and Drama... which she works for. Hardly NPOV. While it may be acceptable to use this in the article (I would still recommend you mention who said it), it doesn't work for me as a hook. I'd suggest a new hook. Regards, Jolly Ω Janner 04:41, 9 February 2016 (UTC)

Jolly Janner Thanks. I have made the change in the article. I am suggesting two hooks below.

ALT1 hook ... that Sarah Tenant-Flowers was the conductor of the debut public performance of Nick Bicât's Requiem for Cantata Dramatica, in March 2012? Nvvchar. 06:57, 9 February 2016 (UTC)

ALT2 hook ...that Sarah Tenant-Flowers has worked as administrator for Choir of the Year and General Manager of "The Sixteen" ?

I've struck ALT1, because it doesn't have an inline citation at the end of the sentence. ALT2 is suitably referenced. Nothing especially interesting about it, but as this isn't a familiar topic for me, I will pass it on interest. If someone looking to promote, disagrees then I will respect that. Jolly Ω Janner 03:57, 11 February 2016 (UTC)