- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Froggerlaura ribbit 02:12, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
Sam Ficken edit
- ... that Sam Ficken received a mentorship from Chicago Bears placekicker Robbie Gould?
- Reviewed: Plaza de Roma
Created by Buggie111 (talk). Self nom at 14:45, 7 January 2013 (UTC)
Date, size and hook seem fine, but please add categories and ping me after this is done so I can pass this.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 16:58, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
Ok, good to go. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 21:48, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
The key hook fact—that Ficken was mentored by Gould—is not supported by an inline source citation at the end of the article sentence which contains the fact, an absolute DYK requirement. I'd also like to suggest that the wording of the hook be simplified: "was mentored by" rather than "received a mentorship from"; the latter reads a bit oddly. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:50, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
What about
- ALT1: ... that Sam Ficken once missed four field goals and an extra point in a game that Penn State lost by one point?[1]
Or
- ALT2: ... that Sam Ficken is the cousin of former Purdue All-American basketball player Robbie Hummel? (in his PSU bio) Go Phightins! 02:47, 16 January 2013 (UTC)
Review needed for new ALT hooks (now numbered) and to confirm sourcing for original hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:33, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
