Template:Did you know nominations/Ruth Sawtell Wallis

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 05:42, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Ruth Sawtell Wallis edit

Created/expanded by Nikkimaria (talk). Self nom at 14:57, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Brand new article with >1500 characters, looks neutral and well cited with no copyvios, and hook is properly cited and confirmed. Assuming source #1 is fine, both of the other sources are online university sites and look good. As for the actual hook, I don't think it 100% accurately reflects the source, since the unthinkable part was that they could both be employed as professors. My impression is that her getting another, non-academic job would not be unthinkable. Not sure how to rewrite it while keeping it concise though. Torchiest talkedits 15:19, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Added "also" to the hook, which should hopefully fix that. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:31, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Works for me. Torchiest talkedits 15:40, 15 June 2012 (UTC)