- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:31, 17 March 2016 (UTC)
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Rulaizong edit
- ... that believers of Rulaizong use the phrase "Thanking Master, Praising Master" to praise the founder of the religion?
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... that Rulaizong is criticized for attracting believers in a direct marketing way in Taiwan?
Created by Billytanghh (talk). Self-nominated at 08:44, 18 February 2016 (UTC).
I removed some pictures from the {{external media}} template, because only images which are really really interesting and not available freely should be put there. A bunch of forms aren't interesting, and neither is a revolving door. I've left two pictures in there (depicting a congegration worshipping). With regards to the rest of the article, it seems to check out (albeit having to assume good faith on the sources; I don't speak Chinese). It's long enough, new enough, QPQ has been done and the hook seems interesting. I can't support this yet, though, because the hook is not directly cited.—♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 12:29, 13 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Amberrock:Is this hook OK?--Billytanghh (talk) 18:53, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
- No, that hook has the words "in Taiwan" kind of dangling at the end. What was wrong with your first hook? I liked that one, it just needs to have an inline citation directly behind the sentence that established said fact. —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 19:28, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Amberrock:Is that OK?--Billytanghh (talk) 02:24, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
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I did a thorough copyedit on the article to bring it up to English grammar. @Billytanghh: could you look it over to make sure everything is correct before we promote it? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:30, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Yoninah:The phrase "verbal persuasion" had changed to "verbal warning".--Billytanghh (talk) 23:42, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you. One more question about the hook: what does "grating" mean? Google Translate has it as "Thanksgiving Master, praise the Master", which also doesn't make much sense. Yoninah (talk) 23:46, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Yoninah:Is that OK?--Billytanghh (talk) 02:30, 16 March 2016 (UTC)
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- No, that hook has the words "in Taiwan" kind of dangling at the end. What was wrong with your first hook? I liked that one, it just needs to have an inline citation directly behind the sentence that established said fact. —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 19:28, 14 March 2016 (UTC)
