Template:Did you know nominations/Robert Copland-Crawford

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:21, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

Robert Copland-Crawford

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• ... that Robert Crawford scored the first goal in international football in 1870, but was later sentenced to 12 months imprisonment with hard labour for causing a servant to be flogged to death?

Created by Daemonic Kangaroo (talk). Self nom at 18:42, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

I seem to have screwed up this nomination. Can someone sort it out for me so that the "Review or comment" link goes to the right place. Thanks. Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 18:51, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

• Fixed. --KFP (contact - edits) 20:34, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
• Hook: Interesting enough, short enough, cited. A more grammatical ALT1: ... that Robert Crawford, scorer of the first goal in international football, was sentenced to 12 months imprisonment with hard labour for causing a servant to be flogged to death?

Article: New enough, long enough. No images. Sources are all PD and cited. Neutral.

Summary: Hold pending feedback on ALT1. Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:47, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

Also, nominator needs to review an article. Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:48, 1 September 2011 (UTC)

• ALT1 is fine by me - definitely reads easier. I have now reviewed Clydie Roberts. Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 05:25, 2 September 2011 (UTC)

• ALT1 is good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:10, 2 September 2011 (UTC)