Template:Did you know nominations/Ricardo de Pedraza Losa
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:54, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
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Ricardo de Pedraza Losa edit
- ... that 2012 vision impaired Spanish Paralympic 5,000 meter runner Ricardo de Pedraza Losa ran in his first marathon in Valencia in 2013 with two sighted guides in a time of 2:57:14?
- Reviewed: Gibraltar Museum,
Created by LauraHale (talk). Self nominated at 13:10, 23 November 2013 (UTC).
- Alt 1... that 2012 vision impaired Spanish Paralympic 5,000 meter runner Ricardo de Pedraza Losa ran in his first marathon in Valencia, Spain, in 2013 with two sighted guides in a time of 2:57:14?
- Alt 1 has no major changes: direct links for sighted guides and Valencia corrected and the word "Spain" added.
Long enough, new enough, hook checks out (in Spanish but Google Translate works fine for reference no.3). Note on style: it may be that in Spanish you can start a paragraph with a lower case "d" for the name "de Pedraza", but in English (in my opinion) it should be an upper case "D" at the beginning of a sentence or paragraph. --Storye book (talk) 13:44, 23 November 2013 (UTC)
- I am fine with the alt. Will fix capitalization at the beginning of sentences just to be on the safe side.--LauraHale (talk) 13:57, 23 November 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for that, LauraHale. A new reviewer is now needed for Alt 1. --Storye book (talk) 14:10, 23 November 2013 (UTC)
- I am fine with the alt. Will fix capitalization at the beginning of sentences just to be on the safe side.--LauraHale (talk) 13:57, 23 November 2013 (UTC)