- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 14:43, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
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Rezan Zuğurlu edit
- ... that Rezan Zuğurlu, who was elected as the youngest Mayor in Turkey from Lice at the age of 25, spent 8 months in the infamous Diyarbakır Prison as part of a 13 month prison sentence?
Created by Rsrikanth05 (talk). Self nominated at 14:59, 13 April 2014 (UTC).
Date, hook, article in general fine. Interesting topic, good to go!Alexikoua (talk) 12:26, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
- The wording here is off. I understand what you're trying to say, but I'd like to take a shot at rewording it:
- ALT 1 ... that Rezan Zuğurlu, who spent 8 months in the infamous Diyarbakır Prison, became Turkey's youngest mayor when she was elected by Lice at the age of 25?
- Alexikoua, thoughts? Sven Manguard Wha? 03:17, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
- I like Alt1. Don't know why I didn't word it properly. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 04:48, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
I'm concerned that some of the phrasing in this article appears too close to that of its main source. Compare for example "a feminist and hopes her position as mayor would help elevate the status of women the district" with "an ardent feminist, hopes her position as mayor will help elevate the status of women in her district". Nikkimaria (talk) 12:16, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
- Changed it. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 12:49, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
Can someone review it? I've changed it now. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 06:18, 21 April 2014 (UTC)
- Better, thank you, although I would suggest some copy-editing. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:31, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
