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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 09:48, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

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Rama tapaniya Upanishad edit

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Rama with his consort Sita
Rama with his consort Sita

Created by Nvvchar (talk) and Ms Sarah Welch (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 06:11, 15 February 2016 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough, hook short enough, sourced properly, qpq done, Earwig does not flag problems, tone neutral, image checks out.
  • However, content needs to be a touch more readable. I would suggest on more copyedit before prime time, there are some awkward phrasings such as "Upanishads attached the Atharvaveda," or "In contrast, Catherine Ludvik – a professor at the Stanford University and an author of books on Hindu deities, however, "
  • I'd also suggest moving around the text boxes so they don't sandwich text between them, I personally see no reason they all have to be in the content section, I'd move one up a bit for a better layout.
  • also the hook itself would benefit from a minor copyedit, personally, I'd phrase it "states that the Hindu god Rama..." JMO.
  • Just smooth it out a bit and I'll have no problems passing this. Montanabw(talk) 22:05, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
@Nvvchar: I have copyedited the article. Please review and address anything I missed. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 01:48, 16 February 2016 (UTC)
  • Montanabw Thanks for the review. Text box has been moved. Ms Sarah Welch coauthor has edited and suggested ALT1 hook. Please see. Nvvchar. 02:19, 16 February 2016 (UTC)

Much better! Good to go with ALT1. Sorry for the delay getting back to you! Montanabw(talk) 06:15, 18 February 2016 (UTC)

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