- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:49, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
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R. W. Buzzard
The Lewis County Courthouse
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that, while Judge R. W. Buzzard has been criticized for drinking in his chambers and carrying a loaded gun in the Lewis County Courthouse (pictured), he also also personally intervened in fistfights in his courtroom and engaged in foot pursuit of fleeing suspects?
- Reviewed: Spira Spica by User:evrik
Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 23:29, 22 November 2019 (UTC).
| General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Hook eligibility:
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- Your current hook is over the limit of 200 characters.
| Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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| QPQ: Done. |
Overall: 
The hook might focus more closely on the chase, which is the most interesting aspect of this case. I'm not sure that the image is adding that much to the hook, but I guess that's for the promoter to decide. buidhe 23:28, 24 November 2019 (UTC)
- Yeah, this is way too long (current hook stands at around 260 characters). This hook is trying to say four things and include details about each of these four things. Would any of these be palatable? epicgenius (talk) 21:47, 26 November 2019 (UTC)
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... that Judge R. W. Buzzard has been criticized for drinking in his chambers and carrying a loaded gun in the courthouse, but has also personally intervened in fistfights and pursued fleeing suspects? - ALT2
... that Judge R. W. Buzzard has been criticized for drinking and carrying a loaded gun on the job, but has also personally intervened in fistfights in his courtroom and pursued fleeing suspects on foot?
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- ALT3 ... that Judge R. W. Buzzard has been criticized for drinking and carrying a loaded gun on the job, but has also personally intervened in fistfights and pursued fleeing suspects?
