Template:Did you know nominations/Queen of Angels Hospital

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:45, 14 December 2019 (UTC)

Queen of Angels Hospital

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Queen of Angels building at sunset

... to help raise money to build the Queen of Angels Hospital the Franciscan Sisters went as far as begging on the streets?Ford, Andrea (1989-01-27). "For Health Reasons ... : Queen of Angels Closes Its Doors, Moves In With a Partner". Los Angeles Times.
- ALT1:... because of its proximity to Hollywood, a number of famous people were born or died at the Queen of Angels Hospital?"Esther Dale, Actress, Dies in Hospital". Independent. California, Long Beach. Associated Press. July 24, 1961. p. 10. Retrieved March 29, 2017 – via Newspapers.com.
- ALT2:... actress Kathryn Crosby studied to become a nurse at the Queen of Angels Hospital?"1963 Press Photo Kathryn Crosby wife Bing Crosby nurse cap Queen Angels School". Historic Images.

Created by Evrik (talk). Self-nominated at 21:18, 4 November 2019 (UTC).

Reviewed: Rick Cluff

Article expanded November 4th & meets prose length requirement. Reads neutral & passes an Earwig's test. My preference is ALT2, but the original is good, too. Nice work, evrik! = paul2520 (talk) 03:47, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this, and first did some editing and reorganization to bring it up to Wikipedia standards. ALT0 is incorrect; per the source they begged door to door, not in the streets. ALT2 seems best, though I would suggest this wording:
ALT2a: ... that actress Kathryn Crosby earned a nursing degree at the Queen of Angels Hospital?
There is a discrepancy in the date of founding between the lead and the infobox. I have also added a "citation needed" tag to the claim that it was the city's premier medical center. Yoninah (talk) 17:38, 14 December 2019 (UTC)

@Yoninah: I aligned the dates, and switched out the word centerpiece for Premier, and sourced it. --evrik ^(talk) 19:10, 14 December 2019 (UTC)

Thank you. Restoring tick for ALT2a. Yoninah (talk) 21:44, 14 December 2019 (UTC)