Template:Did you know nominations/Provisional Office for Mass Organizational Affairs

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 20:03, 27 January 2012 (UTC)

Provisional Office for Mass Organizational Affairs

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Created/expanded by Soman (talk). Self nom at 12:14, 21 January 2012 (UTC)

  • Date, size and such are fine, but I cannot find were the article clearly collaborates the hook. I suggest using the same words in the hook and article (the article for example does not use the word "supervision"). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 04:18, 23 January 2012 (UTC)