Template:Did you know nominations/Protection Act, 2012 (Act 843) - Ghana

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The result was: rejected by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 15:19, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

Data Protection Act, 2012 (Act 843) - Ghana edit

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... that in 2012 Ghana passed a Data Protection Act that protects personal information sent and collected on Ghanian servers?

Created by Iaabdulai (talk). Nominated by Harcamone (talk) at 23:05, 12 March 2015 (UTC).

The article is severely lacking in inline citations: multiple sections don't have any at all, while others have just one that does not always to appear to cover the whole section. Additionally, the whole article seems to follow the original act far too closely for my liking. Although the wording is changed, this is essentially the Act rewritten, which would be a breach of copyright regulations - although paraphrased, the article essentially is a COPYVIO of the structure and format of the Act. Harrias ^talk 22:27, 20 April 2015 (UTC)