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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 13:28, 23 April 2017 (UTC)
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Preston By-pass edit
- ... that the Preston By-pass was Britain's first constructed motorway to open on 5 December 1958 by Prime Minister Harold Macmillan, who described it as a "guinea-pig" for motorways to follow? [1]
Improved to Good Article status by Bungle (talk). Self-nominated at 11:39, 2 April 2017 (UTC).
Has been promoted to GA status, meets the length criteria and seems to be written neutrally. However, there are a couple of issues with the hook – firstly it's a bit convoluted and secondly the hook isn't backed up by the source – it was an engineer that described it as a guinea pig, not Macmillan. I would advise killing two birds with one stone by shortening it to simply "... that the Preston By-pass was Britain's first motorway". Number 57 18:24, 2 April 2017 (UTC)- Methinks that that suggested alternative is not really interesting enough. How about:
- ... that the Preston By-pass, Britain's first motorway, which was opened on 5 December 1958, has been described as a "guinea pig" for all future motorways?
- But even then, there's still a problem with the hook, because not all of its content is included in the article. I also think a hook along the following lines would be better:
- ALT1 ... that when Britain's first motorway, the Preston By-pass, was opened on 5 December 1958, it had unpaved shoulders? Bahnfrend (talk) 12:50, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
- Comment only I prefer ALT1 too, but you should trim "5 December". Edwardx (talk) 19:09, 7 April 2017 (UTC)
- Perhaps instead of my originally suggested hook, it can mention that it had to close after just a few weeks (something which received alot of parliamentory mention, as sourced in the article). So perhaps something like:
- ALT2 ... that Britain's first motorway, the Preston By-pass, had to close within weeks of opening due to frost damage? [2] Bungle (talk • contribs) 12:47, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
