Template:Did you know nominations/Poughkeepsie, Tramps and Thieves

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 16:53, 9 November 2015 (UTC)

Poughkeepsie, Tramps and Thieves

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Improved to Good Article status by Johanna (talk). Self-nominated at 22:51, 30 October 2015 (UTC).

  • Promoted to GA October 29; prose is 9,399 characters including plenty that is outside the Plot synopsis section; neutral and covers reception fairly; citations are good except the two direct quotes in the lead should include citations, even if they're also cited below; free from close paraphrasing or copyvio (16.7% confidence which is good); hook is long but not too long (165 characters), hook is cited to ref 1 but the wording is "The episode was scored by Mark Lanegan, with whom Thomas had gone to elementary school." which is not indicative necessarily of a single song...perhaps reword the hook to say that he scored the episode instead? Hook nonetheless interesting. QPQ TBD; no image to worry about. A few things to fix before this can mosey over to the Main Page. Ping me when you're ready for another look! BobAmnertiopsisChatMe! 05:36, 4 November 2015 (UTC)
  • Thanks for your edits. Hook accepted with good faith in offline (DVD commentary) source. All the best, BobAmnertiopsisChatMe! 23:52, 4 November 2015 (UTC)