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The result was: promoted by Carabinieri (talk) 02:59, 4 March 2013 (UTC).
Poeh Museum edit
... that the Poeh Museum's history is not described in text?
5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk), Rosiestep (talk), Dr. Blofeld and Mr. Bigglesworth (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 04:10, 19 February 2013 (UTC).
Actually, what the article says (unless I'm misunderstanding) is that a permanent exhibit in the museum provides the history of the Pueblan people through visual arts without using any text. I'm sure you would have found it very difficult to write this article if there was no written history on the museum itself :) How about the following reworded hook, and an entirely new one:
- ALT1: *... that an exhibit in the Poeh Museum (pictured) presents the history of the Pueblan people through visual arts, without using any text?
- ALT2: *
... that the Poeh Museum (pictured) is the tallest adobe structure in New Mexico? - Chamal T•C 11:29, 24 February 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks you for the review. ALT1 is acceptable.--Nvvchar. 12:56, 24 February 2013 (UTC)
