Template:Did you know nominations/Peter Newton (winemaker)

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:54, 7 April 2018 (UTC)

Peter Newton (winemaker) edit

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Created by Edwardx (talk). Self-nominated at 00:07, 6 March 2018 (UTC).

Interesting life, on few but good sources, subscription source accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - I wouldn't mind a bit more about his winemaking, - perhaps you can find some. The Potter part would be more interesting if you could say that he was proud of it, and that she was eight. Perhaps drop the son's founding? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:23, 7 March 2018 (UTC)
Thank you, Gerda Arendt. I have expanded the winemaking in "Career", and added a little about his gardens in "Personal life". As suggested, have created an ALT1 for your approval. Edwardx (talk) 22:53, 4 April 2018 (UTC)
Thank you! - These are outstanding vineyards, - I wonder if that could show more in article and hook to people who don't recognize the names. Consider "awardwinning", "more exclusive", - I'll watch. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:00, 5 April 2018 (UTC)