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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:00, 9 May 2017 (UTC)

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Created by Mackensen (talk). Self-nominated at 18:07, 18 March 2017 (UTC).

  • This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and Earwig detected no problems. I find the hook quite incomprehensible - is this an American versus British English problem, I wonder? Let's ask @The Rambling Man: what he thinks of it. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:30, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
  • It's a play on a "pendulum spring." Informally, "to spring" can mean "to pay for; treat someone to." Mackensen (talk) 12:00, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
  • OK, that's an explanation, but I think the meaning is too obscure and that we need a different hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:32, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ...that in 1937 several aeronautical engineers sprung a pendulum on the Atchison, Topeka and Santa Fe Railway? Source: "New Type Rail Coach Tested". Los Angeles Times. December 23, 1937. p. A3; "It's New 'Floating' Coach". San Bernardino County Sun. December 7, 1941. p. 7
  • New hook proposed, keeping with the idea of the first but with a more common meaning of sprung. Mackensen (talk) 12:40, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
  • New reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook; the original hook has been struck. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:30, 20 April 2017 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure about this. Is it meant to be a pun on a spring pendulum? I've read the article but I still don't understand the hook, I'm afraid. A more straightforward/less punny hook might work better. How about something like the following? Prioryman (talk) 12:44, 4 May 2017 (UTC)
  • ALT2: ... that the pendulum car was an experimental forerunner of the tilting train, but was not widely adopted on American railroads?
  • I've no objection to a more mundane hook. Tilting train shouldn't be bolded. Mackensen (talk) 12:51, 4 May 2017 (UTC)
  • My bad, I've unbolded that. I'll leave the hook for someone else to review. Prioryman (talk) 16:29, 4 May 2017 (UTC)
Everything looks good now (fancy seeing you here, Mackensen!) The article itself is good - I agree with Cwmhiraeth there - and the ALT2 hook is easy to understand. Ready to go. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 18:02, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
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