- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 16:41, 17 April 2018 (UTC)
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Pedro Zaragoza edit
... that Mayor Pedro Zaragoza was threatened with excommunication for allowing women to wear bikinis in Benidorm, Spain?Source: "...faced excommunication from the Catholic Church for introducing the bikini to Spanish beaches."[1]
- Comment: As discussed on the Wikipedia talk:Did you know there was a massive copyright violation on the page. I removed most of the article, and started anew.[2]
5x expanded by Meanderingbartender (talk). Self-nominated at 09:00, 1 April 2018 (UTC).
Looking good--entry is neutral, hook is interesting and sourced, copyvio dealt with, entry expanded quite considerably. Just two small questions for you. First, may I confirm that this is one of your first five DYKs, so no reciprocal review is required? I see you haven't listed one as done. Second, what would you think of slightly different phrasing for the hook, since the character limit (200) allows room for a little more context?
ALT1: ... that in 1952, mayor Pedro Zaragoza was threatened with excommunication from the Catholic Church for allowing women to wear bikinis in Benidorm, Spain?
- Thanks! Innisfree987 (talk) 22:28, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Innisfree987: I believe this was my second or third DYK. I lost track. I'm now well over five and I've started doing DYK reviews for new noms. I like the new hook ALT as does add the year. Meanderingbartender (talk) 01:53, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
- Great, we're good here then! Innisfree987 (talk) 01:56, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Innisfree987: I believe this was my second or third DYK. I lost track. I'm now well over five and I've started doing DYK reviews for new noms. I like the new hook ALT as does add the year. Meanderingbartender (talk) 01:53, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
