Template:Did you know nominations/Patrick Eagar

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:08, 4 February 2017 (UTC)

Patrick Eagar edit

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... that Patrick Eagar photographed at 325 Test matches, including 98 Ashes matches?

Reviewed: Assembly Members (Reduction of Numbers) Act (Northern Ireland) 2016

Created by Joseph2302 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:19, 26 January 2017 (UTC).

size and age ok, article written neutrally and sourced, hook sourced and faithful to source - only thing is the hook. I wouldn't use "photograph" as an intransitive verb (always "photograph (object)). Maybe a diferent way - "took photos"? or something similar? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:21, 30 January 2017 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that Patrick Eagar took photographs at 325 Test matches, including 98 Ashes matches?

Casliber Is that better? Joseph2302 (talk) 18:36, 31 January 2017 (UTC)

yep. All good now. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 19:37, 31 January 2017 (UTC)