Template:Did you know nominations/Pat Dillard

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 00:21, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Pat Dillard edit

Created/expanded by PM800 (talk). Self nom at 00:34, 12 October 2011 (UTC)

  • The expansion was large enough, it's neutral, referenced, and the hook is cited too. My only (minor) issue with the hook is that it doesn't specify exactly which putouts record he attained. Single game? Single season? Career? Heading into the review I assumed that it was a career record by the way it's worded, only to find out otherwise. It's a little misleading due to its ambiguity. Would like to see it slightly modified, and then it should probably be good to go. Jrcla2 (talk) 01:40, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - PM800 (talk) 03:36, 14 October 2011 (UTC)