- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by G S Palmer (talk • contribs) 20:32, 24 October 2014 (UTC)
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Otto Lucas edit
- ... that hat designer Otto Lucas died when the plane he was on crashed, killing all 63 people onboard?
- Reviewed: not a self-nom
- Comment: better hook ideas welcome
Created by Libby norman (talk), Mabalu (talk), Gareth E Kegg (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 23:03, 29 September 2014 (UTC).
- Maybe reword? I thought "his plane" meant he owned it or was flying it... though perhaps that's just me. 97198 (talk) 05:14, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
- I had the same thought when drafting the hook, seeking brevity. I've reworded it. Edwardx (talk) 09:44, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
Created on 22 September, long enough, well referenced and neutral. Hook is interesting and supported by an inline citation. No close paraphrasing found. Note that I've removed the DYKmake credits for the Mabalu and Gareth E Kegg, as the sum of their contributions to the article appears to be the addition of categories and an image. 97198 (talk) 13:36, 24 October 2014 (UTC)
