Template:Did you know nominations/Ortwin Gamber

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:31, 25 May 2018 (UTC)

Ortwin Gamber

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Italian suit of armour with sallet, c. 1450
Italian suit of armour with sallet, c. 1450
  • ... that Ortwin Gamber wrote about 15th-century plate armour (example pictured)? Source: Name of his 1950 dissertation is Der Plattenharnisch im 15. Jahrhundert ("The plate armor in the 15th century").

5x expanded by Usernameunique (talk). Self-nominated at 06:23, 7 May 2018 (UTC).

  • General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: AGF on sources as I don't have access to them. Appears straightforward. Hook ok. copyvio/length ok, image under public domain and clear. expanded 5*. Whispyhistory (talk) 07:19, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

  • Article hook is okay but could be better: I'm not sure if being an expert on plate armor is that "hooky". Even then, the hook fact is not directly mentioned in the article, only implied. Finally, the article has an "Expand German" template at the bottom. These need to be resolved before this can be promoted. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 06:30, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
  • Replacing tick. Tag is no longer relevant and hook is about as good as can be got from this article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:31, 25 May 2018 (UTC)