Template:Did you know nominations/Ordnance Factory Board Mine Protected Vehicle
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:04, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
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Ordnance Factory Board Mine Protected Vehicle edit
... that due to the massive casualties incurred by the CRPF, Director general K Vijay Kumar said that the OFB MPV were merely “coffins on wheels”?- ALT1:... that Ordnance Factory Board Mine Protected Vehicles were called "coffins on wheels" by CRPF Director general K Vijay Kumar due to their inadequate protection against IEDs?
Created by Ominae (talk). Self-nominated at 06:03, 1 February 2017 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. I have struck ALT0 as it contains too many acronyms. I am approving the ALT1 hook which is cited inline, the article is neutral, Earwig was clear and I detected no close paraphrasing issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:31, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
I suggest trimming the hook so it's more hooky, making the reader want to click on the article rather than just read the hook and move on:- ALT1: ... that an Indian Police official called the Ordnance Factory Board Mine Protected Vehicles "coffins on wheels"? Yoninah (talk) 19:13, 9 February 2017 (UTC)
