Template:Did you know nominations/Ohio Wing Civil Air Patrol

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The result was: rejected by Harrias talk 07:47, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

Ohio Wing Civil Air Patrol edit

  • ... that Congressman John Martin Vorys himself flew antisubmarine patrol duty from August to September 1942, the only member of Congress to serve in the Civil Air Patrol coastal patrol operation?

Created/expanded by OHWGhistorian (talk). Self nom at 22:28, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

  • Multiple issues. Article has multiple dispute tags (rule D6), has multiple unreferenced paragarphs (rule D2), and has multiple sections containing no information (rule D7). Other issues may also exist as a cursory review was all that was needed to show this nomination requires significant effort before it can be promoted. --Allen3 talk 14:58, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Content issues still exist, including several paragraphs of blatant advertisement. I've removed one. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:53, 19 December 2011 (UTC)