- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Casliber (talk · contribs) 12:06, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
Oh Father edit
- ... that the scene showing a dead woman with her lips sewn shut, in the music video for the song "Oh Father", was inspired by singer Madonna's memory of her mother's funeral?
Created/expanded by Legolas2186 (talk). Self nom at 14:53, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed Ruth von Mayenburg
Good to go, excellent article. Jaespinoza (talk) 07:33, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
What exactly did you check? Either way, Legolas needs to do a review.S/He has more than five. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:19, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for pointing Crisco, I have already reviewed Ruth von Mayenburg. — Legolas (talk2me) 17:21, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
- Very well. Thanks for the speedy reply, Legolas. 22:46, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
- I would either delete the comma after "shut", or add a comma after "Oh Father". As it is now, the sentence structure of the hook is problematic. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:10, 29 November 2011 (UTC)
