Template:Did you know nominations/Odalar Mosque

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 00:45, 3 December 2011 (UTC)

Odalar Mosque edit

The genoese fortress of Kaffa in Crimea

Created/expanded by Alessandro57 (talk). Self nom at 08:35, 14 November 2011 (UTC)

  • Hook: Article doesn't cite that the Italians came from Kaffa.
Article: New enough, long enough. Referencing is fairly thorough, except for the hook fact. AGF on offline sources.
Summary: Hook needs to be made clearer in the article Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:52, 30 November 2011 (UTC)
Hallo, thanks for reviewing the article! I changed the sentence in the article to which the hook refers as follows:
"Due to all that, at the beginning of the sixteenth century the church of Saint Mary had turned into the center of this quarter predominantly inhabited by Italians deported from Crimea, but the building fell soon in disrepair."
Is it better so? Ciao Alex2006 (talk) 11:01, 30 November 2011 (UTC)
  • Still nothing about Kaffa. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:10, 30 November 2011 (UTC)
Kaffa is now in! :-) BTW, the fact that the Italian (Genoese) came from Kaffa was cited already above in the paragraph ("About 4,000..." Alex2006 (talk) 13:30, 30 November 2011 (UTC)
  • Ah, that's how I missed it. It's written Caffa in the one paragraph. AGF on offline sources. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:51, 30 November 2011 (UTC)
:-) Alex2006 (talk) 13:59, 30 November 2011 (UTC)