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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 05:48, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
Nicola Wilson edit
- ... that Nicola Wilson and Opposition Buzz were selected for Great Britain at the 2012 Summer Olympics after Piggy French and DHI Topper W were forced to withdraw?
- Reviewed: Ben Weekes
- Comment: Not pointing out that Buzz and Topper are horses might be seen as misleading but makes the hook more eyecatching. Save for Olympics, Wilson competes 28 to 31 July
Created/expanded by Basement12 (talk). Self nom at 13:24, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
QPQ done. Hook properly formatted. Article fully supported by sources assuming first sentence lead. No pictures to check. Article is neutreal enough. Hooked fact found in article and supported by inline sources.
Concern hook is not clear. Is alt1 okay? --LauraHale (talk) 20:53, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- ALT1: * ... that equestrian eventer Nicola Wilson and her horse Opposition Buzz were selected for Great Britain at the 2012 Summer Olympics after Piggy French and DHI Topper W were forced to withdraw?
- Makes it sound a bit dull, perhaps it would be ok if Opposition Buzz was included in the link to Wilson (if not alt 1 will do);
- ALT2: ... that Nicola Wilson and Opposition Buzz were selected for Great Britain at the 2012 Summer Olympics after Piggy French was forced to withdraw? - Basement12 (T.C) 21:24, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
Good to go with ALT2 as I think it is a bit more clear what is going on without being misleading/deliberately confusing. --LauraHale (talk) 21:34, 17 July 2012 (UTC)