- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:38, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Mutiny at Sucro edit
- ... that ancient scholars considered the Mutiny at Sucro the most important event of Scipio Africanus' early military career?
Created/expanded by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 13:42, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
- Reviewed: St James' Church, Daisy Hill
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- I'd change "consider" to "considered" in the hook to clarify that you're referring to people who actually lived in antiquity (rather than present-day oldsters). I'd also lose the unnecessary "as". Deor (talk) 16:50, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
- Changed hook per Deor's suggestion.--Doug Coldwell talk 18:15, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
Most of the article has the citations at the end of the paragraph they support. Could you put them at the end of the sentences/information supported? AGF on offline sources, online sources are PD or behind paywall. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:57, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
Done --Doug Coldwell talk 15:55, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Good to go! Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:51, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
