- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
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Moupin pika edit
- ... that the Gansu pika was previously treated as a subspecies of the Moupin pika, but is now treated as an independent species? Source: Wilson, Don E.; Reeder, DeeAnn M. (2005). Mammal Species of the World: A Taxonomic and Geographic Reference. Johns Hopkins University Press. p. 193. ISBN 9780801882210.
5x expanded by Adityavagarwal (talk). Self-nominated at 16:06, 16 September 2017 (UTC).
- Solid article on good sources, no copyvio obvious. Go you intentionally have no image. Without it, I don't know even that a pika is an animal, so the hook is for specialists only. Can you tell us anything else, such that they live on Tibet's mountains? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:47, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1: ...that the Moupin pika occurs in the mountains of the eastern Tibetan Plateau in Gansu, southern Qinghai, Yunnan, and Sichuan in China; in Bhutan; in Sikkim in India; and in northern Myanmar?"
- Ah, here is ALT1, does it look better Gerda Arendt?Adityavagarwal (talk) 12:27, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
- It looks better, but is too long, pick two, - you don't want interest people in Yunnan, or do you? Every link not your article diverts interest. - Image? - How about "pikas live", instead of "pika occurs"? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:47, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
- Gerda Arendt In fact, I have merged it with the DYK of the Template:Did you know nominations/Forrest's pika. It looks very interesting there. I hope it is fine with you! The problem is that, I do not know which two to pick (it might look partiality if I randomly pick two countries...) :P. Yeah, if the merge is not fine with you, I would leave two DYKs as is, instead of merging them. I would also unlink the province names. The image does not look so good, so I did not add it. However, if you think it should be added, I would add it. Adityavagarwal (talk) 12:56, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
- I generally advise not to combine. In this specific case, you run in the problem that the other reviewer also doesn't find the species specialties not so interesting.
- ALT2: ...that Moupin pikas live in the mountains of the eastern Tibetan Plateau in Gansu, among others.
approving both --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:09, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
- I'd add the image and a more interesting hook, like:
- ALT3: ...that Tibet's Moupin pika is a burrowing mammal that makes haypiles to store vegetation? Morganfitzp (talk) 13:41, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
- fine with me, watching for other wishes and the image, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:18, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
- Both look fine! Removing the double hook from the other species. Thanks, Gerda Arendt and Morganfitzp! Adityavagarwal (talk) 14:58, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
- I'd add the image and a more interesting hook, like:
- Gerda Arendt In fact, I have merged it with the DYK of the Template:Did you know nominations/Forrest's pika. It looks very interesting there. I hope it is fine with you! The problem is that, I do not know which two to pick (it might look partiality if I randomly pick two countries...) :P. Yeah, if the merge is not fine with you, I would leave two DYKs as is, instead of merging them. I would also unlink the province names. The image does not look so good, so I did not add it. However, if you think it should be added, I would add it. Adityavagarwal (talk) 12:56, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
- It looks better, but is too long, pick two, - you don't want interest people in Yunnan, or do you? Every link not your article diverts interest. - Image? - How about "pikas live", instead of "pika occurs"? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:47, 18 September 2017 (UTC)
