Template:Did you know nominations/Mountain nyala

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:36, 9 February 2016 (UTC)

Mountain nyala edit

  • ALT1:... that the mountain nyala is featured on the obverse of the Ethiopian ten cents coin?
  • ALT2:...that the mountain nyala, endemic to Ethiopia, is the last large antelope reported from Africa?
  • Comment: Both of the hooks above are supported by reliable inline citations in the article, and I believe they are interesting.

5x expanded by Sainsf (talk). Self-nominated at 04:03, 22 January 2016 (UTC).

  • for now, but close to good to go. This is a well written article. It is more than 5x expanded. Long, well sourced. QPQ done. DYK posted by due date. Earwig's: Copyvio unlikely. Main proposed hook verified in Leslie Brown's scholarly paper page 545; ALT1 verified on page 8 of Malcolm and Evangelista paper. @Sainsf: Given Nyala is a South African word, I suggest that the main hook be reworded to clarify the hook is about the Ethiopian species. For example: "...that the mountain nyala, endemic to Ethiopia, is the last large antelope reported from Africa?" or "...that the Ethiopian mountain nyala is the last large antelope reported from Africa?", etc. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 04:19, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
  • @Ms Sarah Welch: Thanks for the review. I would go with the first proposal. The second makes it seem that there are various types of mountain nyala! Sainsf <^>Talk all words 08:07, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
  • , with the above consensus and update to the hooks. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 14:16, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
@PFHLai: Hmm...Brilliant! @Ms Sarah Welch: What do you say? Sainsf <^>Talk all words 10:17, 30 January 2016 (UTC)
ALT3 is best so far. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 13:40, 30 January 2016 (UTC)
Thanks! :-) --PFHLai (talk) 04:26, 31 January 2016 (UTC)
  • @Sainsf:, which nomination did you review for the quid pro quo criteria? It is not linked in the nomination, so a promoter will likely check for it. Jolly Ω Janner 22:56, 6 February 2016 (UTC)
I did not know much about QPQ reviews until I was required to do one for Mongalla gazelle. I guess no one asked me about this because it was possibly not needed for this nomination, it is I think my 4th or 5th nomination. But if you consider it necessary to have a QPQ done then please inform me. Thanks. Sainsf <^>Talk all words 05:22, 7 February 2016 (UTC)
You have 6 credits as of right now, so a QPQ is necessary. Sarah said you had done one, so that's why I was confused. If you feel uncomfortable with your first review, I can give it a second opinion. Regards, Jolly Ω Janner 05:35, 7 February 2016 (UTC)
Thank you. I have begun reviewing the nomination for Adriatic sturgeon, which would be my second review. Sainsf <^>Talk all words 19:36, 8 February 2016 (UTC)
QPQ done. Good job. Jolly Ω Janner 20:54, 8 February 2016 (UTC)