Template:Did you know nominations/Morihiko Hiramatsu

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The result was: promoted by MPJ-DK 01:00, 3 September 2016 (UTC)

Morihiko Hiramatsu edit

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... ~~that when governor of Ōita Prefecture, Morihiko Hiramatsu initiated the One Village One Product movement?~~

Reviewed: Ahmad Abughaush

5x expanded by Dharmadhyaksha (talk). Self-nominated at 06:59, 25 August 2016 (UTC).

The article has been expanded 5x. There needs to be an explicit citation after the information that states he initiated the One Village movement. I would consider rewording the hook. The placement of "when" could cause it to be read as "when governor" or "when he initiated the movement" which are two different things, the latter not being a complete sentence. I think it might be best to say when he was governor or when serving as governor or that as governor just to make it a little more clear. No copyvio detected. Neutral POV. Sources and inline citations look good. QPQ done. Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 17:35, 25 August 2016 (UTC)

Have recalled some refs to have explicit citation after the info in the article. And nice noting the possible interpretations. Proposing new hook for that. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 03:55, 26 August 2016 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that as governor of Ōita Prefecture, Morihiko Hiramatsu initiated the One Village One Product movement?

Thanks for your edits! The article looks good to go under ALT1. Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 19:43, 29 August 2016 (UTC)