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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:28, 14 September 2019 (UTC)

Monowai (seamount)

Improved to Good Article status by Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk). Self-nominated at 20:06, 3 September 2019 (UTC).

  • A GA doesn't need much further review, and the article is fine (I flipped a few notes)--but, and I hate to be nitpicky, the hook: the "growing so quickly" bit is not clear to me--the citation given doesn't address growth. There's "rapid rates of growth" in Watts et al, but I don't see it in Chadwick et al--possibly because it's pretty technical. Jo-Jo Eumerus, help me out please. Drmies (talk) 03:08, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
  • @Drmies:Part of that information is actually in Ronde et al., p.514, I am not sure why Chadwick et al. say "eruption frequency" instead; Monowai is one of the most active submarine volcanoes in the world but it's their magma output that's really remarkable. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 10:10, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
  • Jo-Jo Eumerus, that's what I mentioned as "Watts et al"--you have Ronde as lead author? I suppose you are pointing to the sentence "The resulting collapse and growth..."? Drmies (talk) 20:10, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
  • The ref toolbar does do strange things to lead authors, I wouldn't overinterpret this. Basically Watts et al AKA Ronde et al says that Monowai has a huge magma output rate for a volcano. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 20:30, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
  • (At least your toolbar works--I have to do all this stuff by hand, which sucks when you're writing about sciency topics. Drmies (talk) 14:01, 6 September 2019 (UTC)