Template:Did you know nominations/Mitali Madhumita

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The result was: promoted by Alex ShihTalk 12:10, 26 July 2017 (UTC)

Mitali Madhumita

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Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 16:23, 13 July 2017 (UTC).

  • Article is new enough and long enough. Much of the information in the "Army Career" paragraph does not appear to be supported by the source. Article needs grammar and spelling cleanup as well. Hook is interesting and reliably sourced. QPQ seems to be missing a source review. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 20:10, 14 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Have cleaned it up and add a few more sources.  FITINDIA  17:56, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Um, the article has only two paragraphs right now. Also, by default each statement should be supported in the next inlined source(s). Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 19:45, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Sorry about that, I meant the third para of the source mentioned she was unarmed. I have gone ahead and removed the "unarmed" word and sourced the Lt Col rank .  FITINDIA  20:04, 15 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Have reworded that, Please have a look and if there is anything you see that needs to be reworked please let me know. Thank you.  FITINDIA  03:39, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
* Not sleepy anymore, but it seems like this article in general has an issue with statements that are not backed by the source. "and operations in Jammu-Kashmir and the northeast states of Nagaland, Mizoram and Manipur" is not in the source. "2000-batch officer" is not in the source. "Madhumita was also posted in sensitive areas like Jammu-Kashmir and the northeast of the Indian state" does not appear to be in the source. Some commas are being used when dots would be needed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 08:46, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Could you please have a look now. Thank you.  FITINDIA  11:16, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
  • I am wary about the names of the states again. "Northeast India" does not seem to be a synonym for these. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 13:03, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Have removed the states and kept Northeast.  FITINDIA  13:18, 16 July 2017 (UTC)