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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:20, 16 October 2017 (UTC)
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Melahat Okuyan edit
- ... that Turkish female microbiologist and an AIDS activist Melahat Okuyan proposed once the establishment of male brothels for homosexuals and cross-dressers in order to protect public health?
Source: "Prof. Dr. Melahat Okuyan, Dokuz Eylül Üniversitesi Tıp Fakültesi Hastenesi Mikrobiyoloji Ana Bilim Dalı'nın 11 yıl başkanlığını yaptı." [1], "AIDS İle Mücadele Derneği Başkanı Prof. Dr. Melahat Okuyan" [2], " Prof. Dr. Melahat Okuyan, toplum ve hayatını seksle kazanan travesti ve eşcinsellerin sağlığının korunabilmesi için bir "Eşcinsel genelevleri" kurulmasının şart olduğunu söyledi. " [3]
- Reviewed: Robert Traill (clergyman)
Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 06:47, 15 October 2017 (UTC).
Interesting hook, willing to accept the foreign-language sources in good faith. I would suggest modifying the hook slightly to use this :
- ALT2 ... that Turkish female microbiologist and AIDS activist Melahat Okuyan had once proposed the establishment of male brothels for homosexuals and cross-dressers in order to protect public health?
- What do you think? Jon Kolbert (talk) 15:29, 16 October 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review and acceptance. No objection at all to ALT2. It seems that the original hook was not in correct English. Sorry. CeeGee 17:59, 16 October 2017 (UTC)
- @CeeGee: No problem. One last thing I would change is to use the word "improve" instead of "protect". Jon Kolbert (talk) 19:39, 16 October 2017 (UTC)
- I agree. Please reword the hook if necessary. Thanks again. CeeGee 04:42, 17 October 2017 (UTC)
