Template:Did you know nominations/Mary Isenhour

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Victuallers (talk) 15:16, 31 August 2015 (UTC)

Mary Isenhour

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Pennsylvania Gov. Tom Wolf
Pennsylvania Gov. Tom Wolf

Moved to mainspace by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self-nominated at 18:14, 3 August 2015 (UTC).

  • The article was created two days before the nomination, lenght is good, QPQ done and meets other criteria as well. I think the hook could be more precise ("helped win elections in what way? who is she?"), but otherwise it's good to go. --Pudeo' 20:02, 3 August 2015 (UTC)
    • We could clarify by adding something like "helped with the campaigns of" or something like that. But I sort of like the way it is now, because I think the little bit of ambiguity will urge more people to click on the link. I don't feel incredibly strongly about this though... — Hunter Kahn 01:57, 5 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Pudeo, here's the copyedited hook you want:
  • Good to go with new hook. The picture isn't necessary as it does not represent Mary Isenhour herself, but including it or not is up to the promoter as always. Pudeo' 22:25, 20 August 2015 (UTC)