Template:Did you know nominations/Margaret Windeyer
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:27, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
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Margaret Windeyer edit
- ... that Australian librarian Margaret Windeyer helped found the National Council of Women of New South Wales after attending the World's Congress of Representative Women in Chicago in 1893?
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5x expanded by 97198 (talk). Self nominated at 02:05, 24 September 2014 (UTC).
New enough (expanded 9/21, nominated 9/24), long enough (expanded from 318 to 1,938 characters), neutral, well cited (though only three sources, but that's fine), no substantial close paraphrasing issues detected (just proper names), hook is long but not too long (189 characters; maybe consider changing "the World's Congress of Representative Women in Chicago in 1893?" to "the 1893 World's Congress of Representative Women in Chicago?" to trim just a bit?), content is interesting, cited in article and in source (ref 1), QPQ done, no image. Good to go! BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 17:02, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
The hook reads like a bio and there are some very long links there. How about:- ALT1: that the National Council of Women of Australia made Margaret Windeyer an honorary life president in 1918, though she had never been a member of the council's executive board? Yoninah (talk) 20:01, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
- This works better: more interesting, slightly shorter, cited in article and in ref (#1). Good to go on ALT 1. BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 20:09, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
