Template:Did you know nominations/Mahmood Hayat

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:34, 10 May 2017 (UTC)

Mahmood Hayat

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• ... that Pakistani writer and television personality Mustansar Hussain Tarar described Mahmood Hayat's art as occasionally "extremely brilliant"?
  • ALT1:... that artist Mahmood Hayat was a teacher at the Pakistan Institute of Fashion and Design?
  • ALT2:... that in his 2014 exhibition Using Beauty as a Remedy for Life, Pakistani artist Mahmood Hayat questioned whether objective standards of beauty existed?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hugh de Beauchamp (sheriff) (I previously reviewed this article for a nomination. However I later pulled my nomination so I still have this unused QPQ)

Created/expanded by Coin945 (talk). Self-nominated at 08:39, 23 April 2017 (UTC).

• New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Y
• I have tagged the lead for being too short and not indicating the notability of the subject. Could you add more from the article per WP:LEAD? Y
• The one image in the article is freely-licensed; it's unclear why it was uploaded to Wikipedia rather than Commons.

• I've never uploaded an image to Commons. That is new territory for me. That's the only reason I uploaded it to Wikipedia. :)--Coin945 (talk) 01:38, 9 May 2017 (UTC)

• Regarding the hooks, the mention of someone else in the beginning of the ALT0 is distracting. ALT1 is okay, but you could make it hookier by contrasting the type of art he does now with the fashion & design art that he taught. Yoninah (talk) 00:15, 9 May 2017 (UTC)

• I wasn't able to find a nice contrast between his artistic style and the fashion/design he taught, so instead I wrote ALT2. Is this okay?--Coin945 (talk) 01:38, 9 May 2017 (UTC)

• Nice work on the lead! Still no close paraphrasing found in article. ALT2 is very good; hook ref verified and cited inline. I uploaded the image to Commons and put a proposed deletion tag on the Wikipedia image. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 09:06, 9 May 2017 (UTC)