Template:Did you know nominations/Magdalena Bermejo

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:21, 22 November 2013 (UTC)

Magdalena Bermejo edit

  • ... that Magdalena Bermejo estimated 5000 western lowland gorillas died in an Ebola epidemic?
  • ALT1 ... that of 143 gorillas Magdalena Bermejo studied in October 2002, only 13 were still alive four months later?

Created by Batterbu (talk), RockMagnetist (talk). Nominated by RockMagnetist (talk) at 00:00, 16 November 2013 (UTC).

  • Contains a citation needed request. Prose (515 words) are fine. Sources mostly ok, but www.wilderness-safaris.com seems flashy and comercially diven (it asked me to "Choose my destination", and it's 'about us' section seemed to be a check-in area. Otherwise fine, but I'd really drop wilderness-safaris.com. The source for the hook is behind a paywall but the fact checks out in a google search; but maybe restate as a "2006 outbreak", so as not to be so vague. I think overall the page needs a relook before it maybe passed. Hold in other words. Ceoil (talk) 02:05, 17 November 2013 (UTC)
  • @Ceoil: Thanks for the comments. I was aware of some of these problems but didn't have time to fix them before that pesky five-day limit was up. I have a much better source than www.wilderness-safaris.com, and I'll finish improving the article in the next day or two. RockMagnetist (talk) 07:14, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
  • It's ready now. I think the second hook is better. RockMagnetist (talk) 23:27, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
Inclined to agree. Hook check outs re source and is interesting, lenght ok, etc. Ceoil (talk) 20:26, 21 November 2013 (UTC)