Template:Did you know nominations/Lynching of Samuel Smith
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:33, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
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Lynching of Samuel Smith edit
... that Samuel Smith, a 15-year-old African-American man, was lynched in Nolensville near Nashville, Tennessee on December 15, 1924, but no one was ever convicted?"Mob Lynches Negro Boy Who Shot Grocer. Body of Masked Men Take Him From Hospital. Samuel Smith, 15, Left Hanging Near Home of Ike Eastwood, Whom He Wounded Friday Night". Nashville Tennesssean. December 16, 1924. pp. 1, 5. Retrieved May 2, 2018 – via Newspapers.com.; Deane, Natasha (June 5, 2017). "Memorial Marker for Lynching Victims". St Anselm Episcopal Church. Retrieved April 27, 2018.
- Reviewed: Franz Seraph von Kohlbrenner
Created by Zigzig20s (talk). Self-nominated at 05:38, 8 May 2018 (UTC).
Sad and interesting, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. Hook: qhat do you think about saying the same thing like this:- ALT1: ... that after the African-American Samuel Smith was lynched at age 15 in Nolensville, Tennessee, in 1924, no lyncher was ever convicted?
- Suggestions for the article: Consider to have a given name with Jim and Samuel Smith, because it's confusing enough. Do we say "the hanged figure"? (May be my limited English.) Fine otherwise, thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:48, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
- I added "Nashville" to the hook because he was taken out of his hospital room there, and it is a better known location (a city). Also the plaque with his name is there. So I think it should appear in the lede.Zigzig20s (talk) 16:01, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
- If you want Nashville (again), take out Nolensville, - too much geography when we want to focus on the atrocity. Tennessee is well-known. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:05, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
- Are you sure we can't have both? He was dragged out of his hospital room in Nashville but lynched in Nolensville. I think "Nolensville near Nashville" is not that tiresome.Zigzig20s (talk) 16:27, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
- I tried to solve the Jim Smith/Samuel Smith confusion, and I changed "hanged figure" to "hanged man." Is this better please?Zigzig20s (talk) 21:55, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
- Yes, better. Word a hook with both places if you think that's needed - we don't have to say it all - but link only one, to avoid a sea of blue ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:02, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
- If you want Nashville (again), take out Nolensville, - too much geography when we want to focus on the atrocity. Tennessee is well-known. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:05, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
- I added "Nashville" to the hook because he was taken out of his hospital room there, and it is a better known location (a city). Also the plaque with his name is there. So I think it should appear in the lede.Zigzig20s (talk) 16:01, 8 May 2018 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that after the African-American Samuel Smith was lynched at age 15 in Nolensville near Nashville, Tennessee, in 1924, no lyncher was ever convicted?
I approve both, let's see what the prep builder thinks. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:10, 9 May 2018 (UTC)
