Template:Did you know nominations/Louis Brooks (rodeo cowboy)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 11:54, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
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Louis Brooks (rodeo cowboy) edit
- ... that Louis Brooks was the first rodeo cowboy to win consecutive All-Around Cowboy titles? Source: Professional Rodeo Cowboys Association:* Reviewed: Gern Nagler
Created by Giants2008 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:12, 8 November 2018 (UTC).
Article is new enough, long enough and discusses the topic neutrally. No copyvio or plagiarism issues. However, I can't see the fact for the hook explicitly mentioned within the article, though it is stated within the hook source. PotentPotables ( talk ) 14:01, 9 November 2018 (UTC)
- @PotentPotables: I moved and rewrote part of a sentence to make the hook fact more obvious and used the source link above as the cite. Hopefully that takes care of the problem. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:24, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
everything looks good now, hook is more obvious within the article and all else is fine PotentPotables ( talk ) 16:59, 11 November 2018 (UTC)
- @PotentPotables: I moved and rewrote part of a sentence to make the hook fact more obvious and used the source link above as the cite. Hopefully that takes care of the problem. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:24, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
