- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:15, 28 August 2015 (UTC)
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Loom (band) edit
... that Tarik Badwan, the vocalist of LOOM, has been called "the angriest man to stalk a stage in ages and the owner of the best death stare London"?- ... that Tarik Badwan, the vocalist of LOOM, has been called "the angriest man to stalk a stage in ages"?
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Moved to mainspace by Sovereign Sentinel (talk). Self-nominated at 17:02, 14 August 2015 (UTC).
- "The owner of the best death stare London" doesn't make grammatical sense; it's missing the word "in". This is a direct quote, with the same grammatical error in the source. As this is a direct quote, the correction must be in square brackets, which is okay for the original article but not the most attractive feature for a DYK hook ("the owner of the best death stare [sic: in] London"), so I suggest simply shortening the hook to just the first half of the quote ("the angriest man to stalk a stage in ages"), which is already plenty interesting enough on its own. I've accordingly stricken out the original hook above. —Lowellian (reply) 15:21, 18 August 2015 (UTC)