Template:Did you know nominations/Long-tailed spiny rat
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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 07:32, 13 August 2016 (UTC)
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Long-tailed spiny rat edit
... that some long-tailed spiny rats have lost their tails?
- Reviewed: Miguel Ángel Luna Munguía
5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 12:46, 5 August 2016 (UTC).
The article has been expanded sufficiently within the past week. The article appears to be well sourced, but it says that "many individuals have lost their tails", which I cannot find in the cited paper. Can you please provide a quote? The rest of the article is easily verifiable. If the hook claim (as it appears in the article) can be verified, I would like to suggest a slight rephrasing that might prove to be "hookier"- ALT1 "... that some long-tailed spiny rats do not have tails at all?" This would probably not count as an alt hook. Surtsicna (talk) 12:25, 7 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Surtsicna: The source states "a biopsy from one ear was taken in the case of three Proechimys longicaudatus that were missing tails". I have changed the wording in the article and am happy with your ALT1 suggested hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:12, 9 August 2016 (UTC)
ALT1 hook is good to go. Montanabw(talk) 04:35, 11 August 2016 (UTC)