Template:Did you know nominations/Loipa Araújo

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 11:06, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

Loipa Araújo edit

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... that Cuban ballerina Loipa Araújo (pictured) was a muse?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Njai
Comment: for Women's History Month

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nominated at 05:06, 28 February 2014 (UTC).

Hook and article are well reffed. Length in both cases is fine and there was no obvious para phrasing. I would suggest that a hook noting that she was the Muse of Marseilles or one of the "Four Cuban dancers" might fare better. But I'm happy to tick this one for Women's History Month. Victuallers (talk) 12:23, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

I'm a sucker for short hooks, but that's a good suggestion so here's ALT1: ... that Loipa Araújo (pictured), the "Cuban muse of Marseille", was a ballerina? --Rosiestep (talk) 15:24, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

for either hook Victuallers (talk) 16:13, 1 March 2014 (UTC)