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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:51, 7 October 2016 (UTC)

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List of songs recorded by Alyssa Milano edit

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Created by Aoba47 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:53, 16 September 2016 (UTC).

  • The article is new enough, having been both created and nominated on 16 September. It is certainly long enough; even without the list it meets the length requirement. It is within policy, as it is well cited, neutrally written and with no copyvio/paraphrasing issues. All four hooks appear suitable to me. I'd like to suggest combining the first hook and ALT1 so that both the number of albums and the commercials are mentioned, as they are both interesting facts. Finally, QPQ has been met. So I think this is good to go. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 00:21, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
  • @Athomeinkobe: Thank you for your help. I agree with your suggestion, and I have provided a revised ALT below, and struck out the the above ALT suggestions. Aoba47 (talk) 04:20, 5 October 2016 (UTC)
  • ALT4:... that Alyssa Milano released four studio albums in Japan after appearing in ads there for pasta and chocolate milk?
  • Aoba47, that new one sounds great to be. I think this is ready to be promoted. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 04:25, 5 October 2016 (UTC)
  • @Athomeinkobe: Thank you again! I agree that the new hook sounds much better. Aoba47 (talk) 15:32, 5 October 2016 (UTC)
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