Template:Did you know nominations/Lion Forge Comics

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:51, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Lion Forge Comics edit

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... that Lion Forge Comics was founded to provide ethnically diverse creators an outlet to create ethnically diverse characters? The company was founded ... with the goal of creating comics that have ethnically diverse characters and diverse writers behind the scenes.

Reviewed: Jaroslav Eminger / Template:Did you know nominations/Jaroslav Eminger
Comment: Accepted from Articles for Creation on 2/15/2018

Created by Savant-Man (talk) and Argento Surfer (talk). Nominated by Argento Surfer (talk) at 15:28, 16 February 2018 (UTC).

I'm reviewing this in a moment.--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 23:32, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Nice article, nice subject. Some sentences in the article were not quite encyclopedic in tone, e.g. with beautiful and eerie art and thought-provoking titles. I have rephrased the advertising language in encyclopedic language and am passing the hook. If you want to tweak my edits, feel free to do so, but keep in mind the principle of neutral, encyclopedic language. You might want to use provide instead of give in the hook—just a suggestion. Second suggestion would be to add a picture. But no obstacles to passing the hook as far as I am concerned. Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 23:57, 6 March 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for the copyediting and the suggestion on the hook phrasing - I have changed it accordingly. Argento Surfer (talk) 13:54, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Great! Let's hope the hook comes out quickly, considering the current Black Panther mania.--Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 16:02, 7 March 2018 (UTC)