- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:32, 29 June 2016 (UTC)
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Lewis Robertson
edit- ... that Lewis Robertson offered to give up the captaincy of the Army rugby team because he was out of form?
- ALT1: ... that Lewis Robertson offered to give up the captaincy of the Army rugby team because he felt he was out of form?
- Reviewed: Elmer McCollum
5x expanded by FunkyCanute (talk). Self-nominated at 20:35, 16 June 2016 (UTC).
- @FunkyCanute: Article is barely long enough and has been expanded recently enough. Article appears to be well sourced. Didn't notice any copyright or plagiarism issues. QPQ is done. Hook is interesting, mentioned in the article, although I note the source refers to a self-assessment, a nuance the hook doesn't contain. Might want to mention the other clubs he was member of in the lead. If these things aren't issues I'll check this off.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 15:16, 18 June 2016 (UTC)
@Jo-Jo Eumerus: I've added an alternative hook with the nuance. I've modified the article lead, but rather than list out all the clubs, I've written that he played for several others: some of these are not well-known, so probably not worth mentioning in the lead. FunkyCanute (talk) 11:29, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
then.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 11:37, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
